Ive been working on two different versions and I would really like to know if these are working. Which one is the better direction?
The colors look very different from what they look here. They look much more faded here and some of the pink type might look difficult to read but in the actual spreads they are not.
Version 1
Version 2
I am liking the first one, although the thin font for Daughters seems to be getting lost. Maybe use something more feminine that will stand out more and contrast with Dad? Some really girly typefaces I like are Embassy, Shelley, Snell Roundhand, or maybe Adine Kirnberg.
ReplyDeleteMissionary could be nice for some decorative flair, and could be contrasted with maybe some masculine elements.
Hope this helps!
like both, but neither are "there" yet.
ReplyDeletekeep going.
try a lot of combinations.
keep posting.
if you're looking for girly and daddy looking fonts to pair, dunno.
maybe rethink that position as it's the obvious and think about what point you want to make instead.
what do you want the reader/viewer to "get" from this piece.
aim for that.
love.
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